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What is love?
Can I give it a name?
Can I descrive it?
No, probably not.
I'll try though,
if you want.
It's something special.
That much I'm sure you know.
But perhaps you should dig deeper,
and look into it more.
Have you ever wanted to give someone the world?
Have you ever wanted to help someone achieve all their dreams?
Have you ever wanted to make someone the happiest person alive?
Have you ever wanted to do anything for someone?
If so, you could be in love.
I'm not making any guarentees.
That's just the superficial part.
It's what you feel inside that makes the difference.
Happiness?
Not always.
Calm?
Not always.
I can't really tell you what love is.
I can't make you understand where I'm coming from.
I guess that's why when I'm,
sad,
depressed,
alone,
scared,
uncertain,
and misunderstood,
you can't understand why.
I'm not writing this to make you love me,
I'm not writing this to make you do anything.
I'm writing this for the sake of writing,
for my own sake,
for the sake of those who need to know that someone else knows what they mean.
To know that they're not the only one who's struggling.
Maybe even for you.
Honestly, I don't know why I'm writing this.
I almost don't even know what I'm writing.
The words are just flowing out of my heart,
through my hands,
to my keyboard,
and onto the screen in front of you.
It's times like this when worrying isn't the thing to do,
though you know that's something I'm quite good at.
It's a fact that you mean a lot to me,
I won't lie.
But I think when I say,
I love you,
keep in mind what those words really mean.
I care about you,
I want you to be happy,
I'll always be around whenever you need me,
And as long as you're happy, I'll be happy too.
So even if the whole world turns on you,
and you're going down for the count,
just remember, at least for my sake,
I'll be in your corner cheering you on,
even when the ten comes down.
©2005-2010 ~pota769
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Author's Comments

Can't really describe how I felt when I wrote this. I know I was sad but there's a bit more to it than that, I guess. A person who's very important to me was feeling so absolutely miserable which then of course impacted on me. (You know who you are, heh, and sorry for this I guess.) So, in my upset state, I felt the need to get some emotion out. Made me feel a bit better, hope it can do the same for anyone else who needs it. In retrospect, I'm not all that sure I'm happy with it. I think it comes across kinda bad. I'm gonna take a chance with it though. Hope ya like it.

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:iconcrazedmonkey14:
NIce poem about love there stevey. TO THE MY FAVORITES SECTION!!!!

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"Is that a pigonkey??? Why yes I am!!! Wait what?"

"Life is full of obstacles, and goals. Why? Because we need to improve our soul, the key of life."
:iconupfromthedeep878:
nice very nice dont like the begining as much as the end but still very nice

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"Man! Someone's gotta go back and get a whole shitload 'a dimes!"
:iconpota769:
Thanks... just never call me Stevey again! O_o

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"I've found the meaning of life. Now it's your turn. Go find your meaning."
"Ignorance is self imposed. Open your mind and let the world come in. Then change it."
:iconpota769:
Yeah I'm not as fond of the beginning either. I was in tears when I started it, heh. (I'm over sensitive, what can I say?) But hey, if you've got any suggestions as to how I coulda made this better I'd love ta hear em! =D

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"I've found the meaning of life. Now it's your turn. Go find your meaning."
"Ignorance is self imposed. Open your mind and let the world come in. Then change it."
:iconupfromthedeep878:
ok what i ususally do is i try to make it flow a lot let me explain

What is love?
Can I give it a name?
Can I descrive it?
No, probably not.
I'll try though,
if you want.
It's something special.
That much I'm sure you know.
But perhaps you should dig deeper,
and look into it more.


if you read this allowd it is kind of choppy


changed with same format:

What is Love?
Possible to name?
Possible to describe?
...Impossible
"Just a little something special"
An easily known fact
But look deeper into its pages
And find one's life desires


How i wouild change it:

Love.
Unnamable
Undescribable.
Everlasting

Just a natural feeling?
No... much more
Explore deeper
See what life's love has instore.

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"Man! Someone's gotta go back and get a whole shitload 'a dimes!"
:iconupfromthedeep878:
yeah so i made my own version with it you just gotta go for the flow. it comes naturally to me so i cant really rewrite yours cause it wouldn't make sense for me to if you know what i mean everything i write comes right from my head i do no thinking at all it kinda just falls out so if you read some of my poems they are usually pretty fluid i think thats all this needs

--
"Man! Someone's gotta go back and get a whole shitload 'a dimes!"
:iconpota769:
Kk, tankies! =)

--
"I've found the meaning of life. Now it's your turn. Go find your meaning."
"Ignorance is self imposed. Open your mind and let the world come in. Then change it."
:iconupfromthedeep878:
no problem just go with the flow!

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"Man! Someone's gotta go back and get a whole shitload 'a dimes!"

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